Sample IELTs and TOEFL essays

marjan17 · 25 تیر، ۱۳۸۹

Topic: Affirmative action

Question: Do you think that people from certain ethnic backgrounds should

be given greater access to education?

Food, water and shelter are basic needs for a human. We need them to keep

ourselves alive. However, nowadays, there is also a need for education to make sure

we can survive on this earth. People need education to become knowledgeable. With

knowledge, we will able to work for our basic needs. As education is essential to

everyone, should people from certain ethic backgrounds be given greater access to

education than the others?

In my opinion, everyone should be given an equal chance to access education as

everyone possesses equal human rights. Discrimination should not be practiced.

Everyone has the right to obtain education and there should not be an unfair

distribution of education.

In addition, giving people from certain ethnic backgrounds greater access to

education will results in wider income gaps between ethnic groups. For ethnic groups

that attain better access to education, they are more knowledgeable than ethnic

groups that do not have the advantage to access to better quality of education. With

more knowledge, they will able to acquire better jobs with higher salaries. Their

income will be greater than the others.

Besides, a country that gives all its ethnic groups even access to education will

have a better image in others countries. When all the ethnic groups get equal access

to education, the country will be more civilized as all of its civilians are educated well.

Hence this will portray a model country whereby, different ethnics groups are able to

excel despite their differences.

In conclusion, everyone has equal rights. Therefore, there should not be

discrimination of ethnic groups where only certain ethnic groups are given greater

access to education. Governments should provide education to all their citizens to

decrease the illiteracy rate in their countries and hence improve the living standards

of their countries.

Comments

Good structure and content let down by a large number of article errors.

Rating: IELTs Band 7.5 Word Count: 339

marjan17 · 25 تیر، ۱۳۸۹

Topic: The Environment

Question: Do you think that it is right for rich countries to pollute the

environment?

The environmental crisis has arisen at an alarming level since the industrial

revolution. Land and water have been contaminated and caused harm to living

organisms as well as the environment. Acid rain, green house effect, global warming

and ozone depletion are common terms that we have heard and will eventually cause

the earth to no longer be a safe place to live in.

Rich countries such as The United States and Australia are responsible for

seven out of every 10 tons of carbon dioxide emitted since the industrial revolution.

Other green house gases such as methane and nitrous oxide also contribute to the

heat-trapping condition and result in global warming where the average temperature

increases. Green house gases are emitted mainly due to human activities such as

burning fossil fuels. Consequently, flooding and drought will happen and people

around the world will suffer from their acts.

Besides, the soil pollution it is also an undesirable outcome when rich

countries deprive people of lands for agricultural purpose. Herbicides and pesticides

are used to maximize the production to export their products regardless of the

impact towards the environment. The chemical substances will leave the soil acidic,

the clearing of forest due to agricultural development will also cause animals to lose

natural habitats.

In addition, some developed countries have transferred their industries to

other rural countries to lower their production costs. It causes pollution in that

particular country and they have not taken the responsibility to fix the situation. As a

result, the rich consume and the poor suffer the pollution.

In conclusion, it is not right for rich countries to pollute the environment in

order to achieve economic growth. Actions have to be taken to slower down the

impacts towards environment and human.

Comments

Some very ambitious vocabulary attempted in this assignment. A number of small

grammatical mistakes, but they do not hinder understanding.

Rating: IELTS band 8 Word Count: 291

marjan17 · 11 مهر، ۱۳۸۹

Topic :Capital Punishment

Question :Do you agree with capital punishment

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marjan17 · 11 مهر، ۱۳۸۹

Topic :Culture

Question : because of developments in communication and transportation,countries are becoming more and more alike.how is your country becoming more similar to other place in the world?

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marjan17 · 11 مهر، ۱۳۸۹

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marjan17 · 12 آبان، ۱۳۸۹

IELTS Sample Essays

IELTS Sample Essays

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IELTS Sample Essays

The Academic Writing Module

This comprehensive module will help you to practise and develop the skills and strategies you need to achieve the best possible score in the IELTS Academic Writing test. You will improve your vocabulary and language skills while you learn:

about the writing assessment criteria

how to write effective Task 1 and Task 2 answers

IELTS Writing Task 1 requires you to describe a table or diagram. In this part of the module you will learn how to:

understand the different features and the purpose of graphs and tables

identify significant information to use in your answer

write an organised report describing a graph or table

describe a process (how something works) or a sequence of events

IELTS Writing Task 2 requires you to write a short essay presenting an argument on a particular topic. In this part of the module, you will learn how to:

recognise the different types of essay questions in the IELTS test

write an effective essay (introduction, body and conclusion) for each type of question.

use more complex language to write an effective essay.

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marjan17 · 12 آبان، ۱۳۸۹

Longman IELTS Practice Test Plus 1

Vanessa Jakeman, C. McDowall, "Longman IELTS Practice Test Plus 1 (with Key and Audio)"

MgH | 2009 | ISBN: 0582514576 | 176 pages | PDF, mp3 | 42 MB

Give your students extensive exam practice using the Practice Tests Plus series. Each book has complete practice exams, accurate to the exam level and format, as well as useful tips to enhance your students’ chance of exam success.

What’s special about Practice Tests Plus?

Reassure your students with task specific hints and tips on how to get the right answer

Each book has a number of additional ‘plus’ features including grammar and vocabulary practice, functions banks and FAQs

It includes: * five complete practice tests * additional reading and writing modules for General Training candidates * a full description of the exam * students' top questions answered * Skills for IELTS' sections training key sub-skills for each module * annotated answer key, analysing correct and incorrect answers * sample answers to writing tasks * complete audio-scripts, with answers marked

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marjan17 · 12 آبان، ۱۳۸۹

12 217 Essays in 25 categories!

PDF | 164MB

For students and teachers of English!

Area & Geography (140)

Arts Drama & Film (1396)

Bibliography (49)

Biographies & People (629)

Book Reports (564)

Business & Economics (632)

Controversial Issues (126)

Drugs & Alcohol (127)

Educational Studies (224)

English & Literature (3599)

Health & Humanities (196)

History & Events (325)

Law & Government (233)

Miscellaneous (970)

Mythology & Legends (75)

Philosophy (281)

Politics & Studies (280)

Psychology (157)

Religion & Faith (442)

Sciences (985)

Sexual Education (80)

Sociology (348)

Sports & Entertainment (82)

Technology & Computers (295)

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marjan17 · 12 آبان، ۱۳۸۹

IELTS Video : Write essays and letters

IELTS Video : Write essays and letters

FLV | 178MB

These lessons are provided with hopes that they will help you improve your English skills and your ESL testing results. Good luck!

This english teacher's video explain the main aspects on preparing to writing module in IELTS.

1) IELTS Argument Essay Writing

2) IELTS discussion essay writing

3) IELTS exam letter writing

4) IELTS essay question analysis - What style of essay to write

5) IELTS Fixing problems in your essay

6) IELTS How to start sentences in your essay

7) IELTS How to write a discussion essay outline

8) IELTS How to link an essay's paragraphs together

9) IELTS Written essay from start to finish

10) IELTS How to write an argument essay outline

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marjan17 · 20 آبان، ۱۳۸۹

Cambridge IELTS Collection (1-7)

Cambridge ESOL

Intermediate, Upper-intermediate, Advanced

This collection of practice material for the International English Language Testing system (IELTS) has been specially prepared for publication by the University of Cambridge Local Examinations Syndicate. It provides students with an excellent opportunity to familiarise themselves with IELTS and to practise examination techniques using authentic test material. Cambridge IELTS 2 contains four complete tests for Academic candidates, plus extra Reading and Writing modules for General Training candidates. The book includes an introduction to these different modules together with an explanation of the scoring system used by Cambridge ESOL The inclusion of a comprehensive section of answers and tapescripts means that the material is ideal for students working partly or entirely on their own. The cassettes contain material for the listening paper in the same timed format as the exam.

Key Features

* Contains four complete tests, plus extra Reading and Writing modules for General Training candidates providing ample exam practice for both Academic and General Training candidates.

* Includes a comprehensive section of tapescripts and answers, including models and samples for all the Writing tasks. This makes it suitable for students working partly or entirely on their own.

* Contains a helpful introduction outlining the IELTS format and its scoring ensuring students and teachers have a thorough understanding of what the exam is all about.

Cambridge IELTS 1

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marjan17 · 20 آبان، ۱۳۸۹

Praparation for IELTS Software

Praparation for IELTS Software is a free license software. The purpose of the software helps people improve English skill. The software is not trademark, and it was released by MediaSolution with opened database

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